GOOD DRAFT, TRY TO ADD A BIT MORE OF YOUR ALLUSION IN THERE SO THAT PEOPLE CAN REALLY TELL WHAT EXACTLY YOUR ALLUDING TO. AS(2)
This poem matches alot with the nature because of this calm natural place and you never expect what to expect as you go along besides doing chicken wink
Your graphic is good but I couldn't really tell what your allusion was.
GOOD DRAFT, TRY TO ADD A BIT MORE OF YOUR ALLUSION IN THERE SO THAT PEOPLE CAN REALLY TELL WHAT EXACTLY YOUR ALLUDING TO. AS(2)
ReplyDeleteThis poem matches alot with the nature because of this calm natural place and you never expect what to expect as you go along besides doing chicken wink
ReplyDeleteYour graphic is good but I couldn't really tell what your allusion was.
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