Friday, September 14, 2012

Special Place (Essay)



                 Whenever I got mad or very aggravated I would always listen to music and think to myself about the thing that was irritating me. Whenever I think things over I tend to be more relax and start to calm down. I try to think of a happy memory from my past or a happy place to calm myself.
                 A place that I consider special would be ice palace, although I have a lot of bad memories at ice palace the feeling of the icy cold air, the loud, pounding music, and the smooth movement of me skating across the ice is very relaxing to me. Just Skating smoothly across the ice makes me feel like im gliding, it makes me feel like im really fast as the cold icy wind is passing by. As I skate faster and faster I would have to dodge some people so I dont fall or cause a accident, and as I dodge people, as they pass, I feel like im so powerful, just the feeling that I can go through people in a crowded area makes me feel like I am not able to fall and just go with the flow, its very relaxing.
                 Also, whenever I get mad or irritated at school, during break or lunch I would always take my time to walk around and think, and as I walk around, I walk to the third floor and look at the view of the city of in the distance and relax there al by myself.

2 comments:

  1. You need to remember to captolize capitilize your "I's". Also, you had a few puntuation erros, having to do with coma's and a few periods Lastly, you need to stick to one special place, instead of having a few of them. (:

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  2. But overall it was pretty good! <3
    and we all love you and think your sexy :3 -luke, christine, and mimi

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